Blog 1

Dear all,

This is your task for week 1. Write a paragraph about:

“A difficult time in my life”

Think about a time in your life when you had to do something difficult.  Answer these questions to write your paragraph.

§  What did you have to do?
§  How did you feel?
§  How did you feel afterwards?

Your post should be done in no less than 50 words. Write and publish it as soon as it is possible

Deadline: Friday 20/03/2016 

Read the paragraph below. Can you find mistakes? How many? Can you correct them
Read the paragraph below. Can you find mistakes? How many? Can you correct them
The first time that I saw a book about programming, it appeared to be really complex for that reason I did not pay more attention to this matter. After some time, I started to learn EXCEL and in an advanced course I learned VBA. At the beginning, I did not understand really well the syntax but then I realized that it was very intuitive. Finally, when I got my EXCEL certificate of my advanced course I felt proud of myself.
A difficult time in my life
A very difficult time in my life was when my father died. It was suddenly. He went to the hospital for a disease and the Doctor said He had to staid at the Hospital because the Doctor discovered cancer and He needs to take a sample to discover if a good one or bad one. All of us in my family were worry because no one in our family was history of cancer. At that moment I´m lived in other country and when I heard the news and talked with my mother, I wanted to return to my country, but my father said don´t worry I´ll be fine you don´t need to return I´ll be fine, and I said ok.
But it wasn´t ok, and after few days He dies at the Hospital, He don´t survives at the surgery. I felt sad and angry because I wanted to return and stayed with him but He said me don´t worry I´ll be fine.
I was return and could saw his face, it was quiet I don´t saw pain in his face and that moment I felt a little peace. Sometimes I remember his laugh.
Five years ago, my father died when I was fifteen . I was out with my friend , were walking .when I return to my house , my mother walk to me and in this moment , only just cried. Evereday was sad . Were weeks very bad for my family . Now , i know that remember a things with my father.
Every year ,day 14 , we go to the church and pray . I miss you Tito.
Hope it helps for your blog in Cambridge. Remember to read the unit before you starts writing.

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