Blog 14

Dear all, This is your task for week 14. “Talking about the past.” Write a paragraph about the most important events in your life. Make sure that you: §  Say when and where you were born. §  Say where you lived /went to school, etc §  Use: before, after, as soon as, When… Your post should be done in no less than 50 words. Write and publish it as soon as it is possible Deadline: Friday 17/06/2016

Read the paragraph below. Can you find mistakes? How many? Can you correct them

hello my name is paulo I was born in the district of lynx on the 20th of April 1987 and since birth have always lived in groove from my childhood until today, when I started to study from 6 or 7 years there was a school nearby my house and there I studied him never said his name always all parents knew him as a nickname called it the bajadita until third grade was my stay because I moved to another school as soon as I got took me or me enrolls in school jorge chavez that is close to my house also from fourth grade until I graduated from high school was in that school was unforgettable moments my stay at the two schools made many friends who now only some I see in today the rest just kept going after everything that happens or vivi I always remember all of them until today that I am in my institute called Cibertec

school to secondary and after that I finally graduated with honors. Most of my school friends have lived in San Miguel since I have memory. We know one another pretty well and got through good and bad times. The most remarkable event was our promotion travel to the North. Travelling by bus was amazing, we were chatting and sharing while seeing beautiful landscapes. We checked in several hotels during the travel, visited varies touristic places and even ate together. I recall one time when we got away from our hotel in Cajamarca with direction to a club during the night; however, after some hours, we were finally caught by the supervisor drinking and dancing in the club. The sub-director shouted us to everybody in the main square and we all kept in silence listening his words. At the end, we returned the hotel and the next day we continued our travel to the North.(Cisneros Deza Jorge Luis)

Hope it helps for your blog in Cambridge. Remember to read the unit before you starts writing.